re. my previous post... Well, I've written the On the Road epilogue. However, because of the aforementioned ditherings and insecurities, I'd really like a second (or third, or fourth) opinion on whether it's something that adds to the story or detracts from it. So is there anyone out there who has read On the Road to Come What May all the way to the end, and is willing to take an advance look at a possible epilogue and help me decide whether this is something I should post, or something I should consign to the nether regions of my hard drive?
The story is a little less than 5000 words, and I'd probably be wanting to send it to you tomorrow, and would want an opinion back by the end of the weekend. You can comment here (I'll screen comments, if you want to include contact info), PM me at Gateworld (username "rhymer"), or email rhymer23 at gmail dot com.